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Please check out chapter one, now posted :D fav.me/d4ighs5

This is just a teaserr! if you like it, promote it! if I get enough views/faves/comments I'll continue writing!! :) Enjoy :)


The pain was unbearable. My body was stiff all over, so much so that it hurt. I could feel something running through my veins, mixing with my blood and filling my body.

It hurts.


"I see you've finally awakened, sleepy beauty.. Or are you Snow?" there was humour in the voice I heard; I could imagine a cocky smirk. I opened my eyes, and I was right. There it was, playing on the lips of a gorgeous man, shrouded in darkness except for half of his face.
"Who are you?" I asked, my voice shaking as I sat up, rubbing my eyes. I heard him chuckle,
"Me? I'm your Prince Charming, can't you tell?" his voice dripped with sarcasm as he said this, and he stepped out into the light, and my line of sight. He was tall, much taller than me, with shaggy dark hair, and a good build, not too muscular, but he looked strong. I met his eyes and blushed, looking away.
"Done checking me out?" My eyes flicked back to his and I saw that they  were dancing with humour. My eyes traveled down to his mouth, and I saw him close it. My gaze met his once again, this time I was confused while he was... Angry? He looked away with a sigh, and then back at me.
"I guess I should tell you now then shouldn't I?" My confusion grew stronger and I looked at him, he looked back and took a deep breath, blowing it out slowly and then started to smile. I watched, confusion growing to terror as he revealed his secret.
This is just a teaser, if it's popular maybe I'll continue writing it :) Comments and faves if you like it ! <3 Pleasee :)

Check out chapter 1 Finally posted :)
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This is actually a sort of collab with someone, Morteque. The idea was hers and I build off it, and the picture is hers too! check it out at the first link, the second is her profile :)
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Marek987987 Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2011
Love it!
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Muffyme Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2011
awesome
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plusha4you Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2011
amazing
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hibasarts Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2011
woww :D great work :) keep it up !
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MrsDerekSouza Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Please check out chapter one! The link is in the desc!
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Tachi-Chan92 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2011
Love it!
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MrsDerekSouza Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Please check out chapter one! The link is in the desc!
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Oridago Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2011
Awesome work!
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MrsDerekSouza Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Please check out chapter one! The link is in the desc!
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Timire Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2011
That is just so awesome! Love the hair and the expression on the face!!
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MrsDerekSouza Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Chapter one is finally up! :) [link]
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MrsDerekSouza Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
The picture isn't mine actually :$ Please check out the first link in the desc for the picture, the second link leads to the artist :)
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lovecocoabeans Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
pretty please write it?!
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MrsDerekSouza Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Chapter one is finally up! :) [link]
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MrsDerekSouza Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Chapter 1 coming up, I hope that one is popular too!
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Morteque Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
Fantastic! It is getting lots of faves so I really REALLY hope you finish the whole story!! :love:
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MrsDerekSouza Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Chapter one is finally up! :) [link]
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MrsDerekSouza Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
I'm working on chapter one right now :)
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Waterfall24 Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
featured in my journal: [link]
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:iconmrsdereksouza:
MrsDerekSouza Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Chapter one is finally up! :) [link]
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MrsDerekSouza Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Wow thank you so much :) <3 It means a lot, I'm actually writing chapter 1 right now :$
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Waterfall24 Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
awesome
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rayne2021 Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2011  Student Digital Artist
well, i'm definitely intrigued. you should write some more I'd like to see where this goes
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MrsDerekSouza Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Chapter one is finally up! :) [link]
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MrsDerekSouza Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you, I'm planning on posting chapter 1 soon, if it's popular I'll continue.
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rayne2021 Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2011  Student Digital Artist
wonderful, I hope that you do.
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Arisa4234 Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2011
WOW SOOOO FN AMAZING!!!!IT LOOKS SOOOOO REAL! I THOUGHT YOU TOOK A PICTURE OF IT!!!! :iconcutiezeroplz::iconcutieyuukiplz::iconcutiekanameplz:
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MrsDerekSouza Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Chapter one is finally up! :) [link]
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MrsDerekSouza Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Lol picture isn't mine, check out the first link for the picture and second link for the artist :) but yes, it is amazing :)
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NydiaCornejo Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2011  Student General Artist
Eerie and beautiful at the same time! Great job!
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MrsDerekSouza Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Chapter one is finally up! :) [link]
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MrsDerekSouza Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :)
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throtmorton Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2011  Student General Artist
love it! and i usually dont like vampires!
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MrsDerekSouza Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Chapter one is finally up! :) [link]
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MrsDerekSouza Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Awe thanks :) Help Promote :D
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throtmorton Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2011  Student General Artist
Ya of course!!!! :D
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Kittenlytea Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2011
I think you should continue it! <3
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MrsDerekSouza Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Chapter one is finally up! :) [link]
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MrsDerekSouza Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks, Help promote :D
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yukijadedsoul Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2011
love it
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MrsDerekSouza Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Chapter one is finally up! :) [link]
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MrsDerekSouza Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thxx help Promote!
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Heroine-of-the-Day Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I wants moar!
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MrsDerekSouza Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
teehee! I love writing it.. I guess I'll write more :)
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InkRose101 Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
Oh do continue! What is his secret? Is he a vampire? A monster? The big bad werewolf? A dragon? Is he a evil wizard in disguise? An kind ugly man under a evil beauty spell? Will he steal her heart away and eat it? Will he love her or destroy her, or both?! Do please tell! You got me on the edge of my seat! (Big kitty eyes shining with excitement)
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MrsDerekSouza Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Chapter one is finally up! :) [link]

I hope you enjoy it :) I gave a bit more information away! :D
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MrsDerekSouza Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
It's people like you who make me want to write.. just for you! <3 :$
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wingedhorsegirl Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
dude this is amazing u've gotta continue it!
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MrsDerekSouza Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Chapter one is finally up! :) [link]
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wingedhorsegirl Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
sweet!
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