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Please check out chapter one, now posted :D fav.me/d4ighs5

This is just a teaserr! if you like it, promote it! if I get enough views/faves/comments I'll continue writing!! :) Enjoy :)


The pain was unbearable. My body was stiff all over, so much so that it hurt. I could feel something running through my veins, mixing with my blood and filling my body.

It hurts.


"I see you've finally awakened, sleepy beauty.. Or are you Snow?" there was humour in the voice I heard; I could imagine a cocky smirk. I opened my eyes, and I was right. There it was, playing on the lips of a gorgeous man, shrouded in darkness except for half of his face.
"Who are you?" I asked, my voice shaking as I sat up, rubbing my eyes. I heard him chuckle,
"Me? I'm your Prince Charming, can't you tell?" his voice dripped with sarcasm as he said this, and he stepped out into the light, and my line of sight. He was tall, much taller than me, with shaggy dark hair, and a good build, not too muscular, but he looked strong. I met his eyes and blushed, looking away.
"Done checking me out?" My eyes flicked back to his and I saw that they  were dancing with humour. My eyes traveled down to his mouth, and I saw him close it. My gaze met his once again, this time I was confused while he was... Angry? He looked away with a sigh, and then back at me.
"I guess I should tell you now then shouldn't I?" My confusion grew stronger and I looked at him, he looked back and took a deep breath, blowing it out slowly and then started to smile. I watched, confusion growing to terror as he revealed his secret.
This is just a teaser, if it's popular maybe I'll continue writing it :) Comments and faves if you like it ! <3 Pleasee :)

Check out chapter 1 Finally posted :)
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This is actually a sort of collab with someone, Morteque. The idea was hers and I build off it, and the picture is hers too! check it out at the first link, the second is her profile :)
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Marek987987 Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2011
Love it!
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Muffyme Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2011
awesome
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plusha4you Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2011
amazing
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hibasarts Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2011
woww :D great work :) keep it up !
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MrsDerekSouza Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Please check out chapter one! The link is in the desc!
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Tachi-Chan92 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2011
Love it!
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MrsDerekSouza Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Please check out chapter one! The link is in the desc!
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Oridago Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2011
Awesome work!
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MrsDerekSouza Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Please check out chapter one! The link is in the desc!
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Timire Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2011
That is just so awesome! Love the hair and the expression on the face!!
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